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The sun sleeps as the desolate city streets await the morning rush hour Driven by an inexplicable compulsion I enter the building along with ten other swimmers inching my way toward the cold dark locker room of the Esplanada Park Pool One by one we slip into our still-damp drag suits and make a mad dash through the chill of the morning air stopping only to grab pull-buoys and kickboards on our way to the pool Nighttime temperatures in coastal California dip into the high forties but our pool is artificially warmed to seventy-nine degrees the temperature differential propels an eerie column of steam up from the waters surface producing the spooky ambience of a werewolf movie Next comes the shock Headfirst immersion into the tepid water sends our hearts racing and we respond with a quick set of warm-up laps As we finish our coach emerges from the fog He offers no friendly accolades just a rigid regimen of sets intervals and exhortations Thus starts another workout 4500 yards to go then a quick shower and a five-minute drive to school Then its back to the pool the afternoon training schedule features an additional 5500 yards Tomorrow we start over again The objective is to cut our times by another tenth of a second The end goal is to achieve that tiny unexplainable difference at the end of a race that separates success from failure greatness from mediocrity Somehow we accept the pitch--otherwise wed still be deep in our mattresses slumbering beneath our blankets In this sport the antagonist is time Coaches spend hours in specialized clinics analyze the latest research on training technique and experiment with workout schedules in an attempt to defeat time Yet there are no shortcuts to winning and workouts are agonizing I took part in my first swimming race when I was ten years old My parents fearing injury directed my athletic interests away from ice hockey
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