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A role model is a person who I look up to and have greatly influenced in my life and that special person is my father He possesses certain qualities of a good role model that set examples of being comical supportive and shows great strengths of a hard worker Being comical through hardships is one of a kind trait that my father holds He is just full of joy and happiness that nothing stops him for being too gay Seeing him every day and night happily makes my teeth crackles smiling Hell have his struggles his complications his hardships but he fights with a positive and comical attitude In example he was terminated from his job for attending a court session and he was glad that they let him go Most people mourned for their jobs but my father was happy I gave him a glare look and said Okay I find it eccentric but he is my father and who am I to judge him My father has another trait of a good role model is being supportive The reason why my father is supportive because he would listen and not judge from my or others emotional complications At a point I had the state of depression and the mentality of suicidal thoughts in my middle adolescence years My father didnt realize from the start until he realized that my behavior mood and attitude have been tainted Hell sit and talk with me infinitely until the moment of light shined upon me His saying as a supportive role model Dont let nothing drag you down With that saying I kept my head high and walked over the negative puddle Not just being supportive his words supports and affects others even I For that reason my fathers trait as a supportive role model is something I admire Lastly my father shows great strengths of a hard worker is another example of a good role model
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