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It was during September of my freshman year of high school and I was about to perform in my first show choir concert I can picture myself wearing my royal blue chiffon dress with the top of it glittering like a diamond because of all the sequins My stomach was full of a million butterflies fluttering around my knees were shaking and my palms were sweaty but I just smiled like I knew what I was about to do I was so scared scared about messing up about falling about forgetting what note I was supposed to sing but most of all I was scared of the crowd The whole gymnasium was filled with people This was going to be my first time to get up in front of a large crowd I can almost hear the silence of the crowd as we lined up for our first song The pressure was agonizing until the music started Then I started to relax and as I was spinning around doing all of the right dance moves the harmonious notes just seemed to flow out of my mouth I was putting my all into my dancing and singing As the concert progressed I felt pride in myself and I got a total adrenaline rush and my self-confidence was boosted Until the last song then the inevitable happened I tripped Luckily I regained my balance and didnt fall to the ground and as I was regaining my composure I could hear my directors voice in my head saying if you mess up its okay just pick yourself up and continue where you left off and put a smile on your face and act like it didnt happen I followed her advice and did exactly that At the end of the concert even though I had messed up I felt really good about myself because I had conquered one of my fears performing in front of
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