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It was the first day of my grade 10 I was sitting alone in the table looking at my books Dack Dack Dack Sound of clicking heels grabbed my attention A tall lady with long silky hair stylish dress and high heels was walking through the doorI smelled a strong odor of rose perfume in the air She was unlike anyone else in our schoolShe came to me and said Hey Can I sit hereOf course I saidThis wasthe first day I met my inspirationMy respect for this new friend developed in my early high school year During my school I was convinced that she was the perfect person in the world She had a keen dressing sense Everyone in the street turned back to look at her twice She was also hardworking and a patient person I liked everything about her I remember back in those days we listened to my grandmothers stories I went to my first party with her I went to parks parties outings picnics and everything else with her Her company had warmth like with nobody else I often look back at the wonderful times I had with her I get surprised realizing the fact that person had such an enduring influence over me She was a teacher when I had a test a friend when I wanted to hand out and a parent when I needed care and protection Without doubt I was really inspired by herBut one day my life changed foreverIt was a cold dry winter day I was sitting on the balcony sipping my cup of coffee with my friend Suddenly I heard a loud male voice coming toward us He was coming towards us with a red face and intense anger My friend was totally shocked to see him and she was trembling like a leaf He grabbed her hair and shouted You bitch now stop coming to my house after I gave you money
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