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A girls first kiss whether good or bad is an experience she never will never be able to forget At age twelve I had never had a serious relationship with a guy although it seemed as though every girl my age had already kissed several guys It really hadnt bothered me because I really wasnt interested in any of the guys I knew at that time Then when it seemed as though I would never find a guy I would be interested in I met Blake Sadler Blake and I first met through my cousin Amber One night when she was spending the night with me she decided to call Blake After she talked to him for a few minutes she handed me the phone I was amazed at how comfortable I felt talking to him He had a very outgoing personality which made it easy to carry on a conversation with him A few weeks later I was able to meet him in person He was approximately 510 and 135 pounds His hair was black and his eyes were a beautiful sea green Overall I did not find him extremely attractive but his personality made up for it A few weeks after we started talking though he asked someone else out I was disappointed at first but his seeing this other girl brought us closer as friends One day after he had been seeing that girl for a few months Blake called me and told me that they had broken up I felt sorry for the girl but I also felt that I finally had a chance to see where things would go between us A couple weeks later he asked me out and of course I said yes During our first month of dating he invited me to a Mardi Gras dance at his school I was ecstatic it would be our first real date Even though I was excited about the dance
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