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Our moment in history My moment in history would have to be my first rave I ever went to It was in an old abandoned warehouse and my friends and I had never been to a rave We thought it would be a good idea to get there early so we wouldnt stand in line to long But as it turned out there was no line and we appeared to be the first ones there My friend mustered up the courage to go talk to the guy at the front of the building There was just one problem he was missing his ticket Not understanding that he needed a ticket to get and that the building didnt open for another hour he sat there and argued with the man about how he should be let in right now Well the man eventually calmed my friend down But sent him to a checkpoint which is a way to detour people that the doormen feel should not be in the rave Any way I was volunteered next to go up to the man after my friend drove off So I said heres my ticket when can I get in He explained that this building would not open for an hour and that we best drive around for an hour or so I went back to car and told about how we were too early They agreed that we should drive around for a while As we drove around I saw my friend driving around He pulled us over and started to talk to us Are you guys going though the check points too He said but we were thinking to our selves what is he talking about So he went on to say how he had been going to check points that take him to the rave He asked us why we had a confused look on our face and I said No reason Well
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