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My whole life I always wanted to be in the water I love drinking water and being in the shower for a long time I always ask my parent can we go to a swimming pool so I can play in the water for hours Their nothing better than thinking about water everyday but the thing about is that I cant swim Everytime I have the chance I tell my parent to give me swimming lesson but they always decline When I sometimes am in the pool I see how other people swim and I always try to copy how they swim Even when I see Im doing the same stuff they doing I never get so farDuring my high school I played tennis throughout 10th grade to 12th and I would say I was ok I wasnt the best player there but at least I try When I was in the 11th grade I continue playing tennis but turn out one of my friend in the tennis team was also in the swimming team One day I talked to him about him being in the swimming team and I ask him if I could still join He said yes but I have to join next semester He first gave me a sheet to fill out for the team and then I wait I was excited because finally I get to learn how to swim Time pass by quick and the second semester begin My friend told me there was going to be a number 66 bus to take us to the old YMCA so waited and start playing tennis When a number 66 bus came by my friend called me over and went on the busWhen the bus took us there I got out and follow my friend because I didnt where to go I followed him all the way to the locker room That where I met the coach I introduce myself and
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