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THE FIRST TIME Slush Slush Slush Ahhhhhhhhhh Well there goes another graceful one I looked admirably down the slope How do they do that With lots of practice Veronica replied sarcastically No kidding I gave her a look Then with a unsure voice I said Im going to try it myself wish me luck Break a leg Ha Ha very funny Slowly I crabbed walked up the slope Shaking all over I was afraid to look down Yet I still had the courage to stagger myself to the top Feeling a little dizzy by the high altitude I took a deep breath of the cold frost bitten air Then without a second thought I lowered my knees and gave it a quick push Ahhhhhhhh Oh my God what have I put myself through Is this what I really came here for Why do I feel like Im flying like a 747 heavy but still floating in the air Have I died and left my body No No Im to young to die Give me another chance to live Please let me go Suddenly I felt myself swaggering The air pressure pushing harder below me No No I take it back dont let me go Thoughts that were racing through my mind were blown away by a sudden Thud like all those times Ive dived off a diving board with my belly down Where am I I whispered to myself Why is it so cold Hey Jo Get up Uh Hurry before someone accidentally skis over you Veronica cried dragging me with her Veronica Is that you My friend gave me one of her questioning looks Has your mind been blown away by the wind Im still alive I cried gratefully I guess so How did I look when I came down You looked magnificent and I got it all on film Veronica said proudly Even the part when you landed flat on your
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