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A few weeks ago specifically August 6th I had been riding in my sisters cramped car on the way to Rochester New York for the simple reason of my great-aunts birthday But really it had turned into more of a family reunion on my fathers side though with close to one hundred people coming to New York from different parts of the country My sister my brother and I had come from Northeast Ohio our father stepmother and two stepsisters had come from Florida on a plane Theyd of course gotten there far before we did But once we were there we all crammed into my dads rented SUV and headed over to the place where the canal boat was docked fifteen minutes from the hotelThe canal boat had two levels the top level of which did not have a roof a nice relief from the hot un-air-conditioned crowd of people below The next few hours I wandered about saying hello to random people and suffering through most people asking the same things How old are you What grade are you going to be in Are you excited about the new school year There were thankfully a few more interesting conversations such as the conversation I had with my fathers cousin which was about a person falling off of the boat Near the end cake was served which I did not particularly like And soon after the boat pulled back into the dock signifying the end of our wonderfully breathtaking canal boat ride We returned to our hotel my father stepmother two stepsisters sister brother and I where I was forced to share a bed with my sister We drove back in the morning Not the most exciting trip ever but it is the history of this picture After all history is a record of the past and it was what happened Really I enjoyed itThe reason we went to Rochester besides to be reunited
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