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Kibin. (2025). My hobby is reading. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/my-hobby-is-reading-XtcTI2Ff
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"You successfully convey your love of reading to the audience, and your voice as an author comes through well with your writing. However, the essay would benefit from a thorough edit to address writing convention errors. Your second paragraph has many verb tense issues, and there are instances where key words are missing from phrases, as seen with the absence of “like” from “would to think.” There are also some issues with subject-verb agreement, and you have a tendency to use the semicolon where a colon would be more appropriate. Words that need revision include “hardcove” and “highschool.” Moreover, a term such as “emerald green” should not be capitalized."
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(Kibin, 2025)
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Kibin. (2025). My hobby is reading. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/my-hobby-is-reading-XtcTI2Ff
In-text citation:
("My Hobby Is Reading.")
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"My Hobby Is Reading." Kibin, 2025, www.kibin.com/essay-examples/my-hobby-is-reading-XtcTI2Ff
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1. "My Hobby Is Reading." Kibin, 2025. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/my-hobby-is-reading-XtcTI2Ff.
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"My Hobby Is Reading." Kibin, 2025. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/my-hobby-is-reading-XtcTI2Ff.
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