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When I was a young boy at the age of nine years old my father gave me money to spend but it was to last me all week long Not alarmed by how much time I had between now and next week never came to mind until I had spent the money and by then it was to late I went directly to the mall and bought these new shoes that I had seen advertised on television with the logo of my favorite athlete named After going to school the next day and showing my new shoes I had almost everyones heads turning for look at them I began to feel that these shoes were just another item on the shelf because everyone told me that they seen the same shoes on sale for a cheaper price then I had bought them for Now that everyone had my shoes I felt that I had spent a lot of money on my looking good when in the long run I was looking good for myself By day three I decide that I would go to the mall to price the same shoes and sure enough my shoes were marked down thirty- percent off on sale I felt that I was cheated out of seventy-five dollars when I was suppose to make that money last for two weeks It wasnt until a few days later that I had seen more than three other kids wearing my same shoes I then realized that trying to keep up with an image gave me more of a challenge then a pleasure This was when I decided that giving in to advertisements left an impression in my mind saying that I should and will no longer be tempted to buy things that are unnecessary items Like the shoes I gave into the whistle now I must save my money and never again give into the whistle After years of understanding and
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