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I am a student at GGC my major is accounting and minor is business I am currently taking English 99 a class for students who couldnt pass the compass writing test This class helps us as students to write a well written paper I myself need help with writing papers Some of my mistakes were my grammar staying on main topic and my paragraphs not being organizedEver since elementary my grammar was not what you call good I tried my best to understand until one day I just stop trying and just gave up In middle school I then tried again I stayed after school to ask my teachers for help I was at the point I was asking other teachers in my school These teachers were not clear enough because I am a visional learner Mr Jones was my favorite English teacher he taught me everything I didnt understand The number one thing Mr Jones taught me was you have to stay confident even if the answer is wrong because you never know you might just get it right With these words I was infused to learn more and more about English English is not my best subject but in order to do any other subject I learned that you need English more you than you think English 99 taught me that my writing still needs work in staying on the main topic Staying on topic is a major part on writing an essay Sometimes I thank its just me thinking too much as I write and must of it do not get written down In my papers I was told it lacks paragraph organization Meaning my paragraph was not organized enough they were all in the wrong places Although my paragraphs were not organized enough I did have a lot of details My details on the topic were not in the correct order but that means I had no organization which I worked
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