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I came from a little country called Lebanon Throughout my academic journey good grades came to me faster than bikini girls came on to me on a regular beach day Anyhow my attitude truly reflected my overly self-confidence and my lack of ambition towards anything But when my family moved to America I suddenly had to face a new academically more challenging school with the worst barrier you can have a language barrier Throughout my year I wasnt intimidate by my over achieving peers and I didnt really focus too much on getting good grade because honestly I never had to Until one day when my teacher give me my report card and I had to face reality I walked home that day crying and had a talk with my mother Throughout the conversation with her I picked a line that made me recognize what I was lacking She told me positive thoughts self-confidence and working hard are the key roles to achieve success I had the two of the three listed but I knew that I ignored that most important one From that day and on I knew I had to change and become a more dedicated student So I started to focus in class and went to tutoring every day I set academic goals for myself and started to commit to them In the end of my school year hard work didnt only help me pass my classes but also helped me create a stronger character for myself
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