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During high school many kids just hang out with a certain type of group The popular kids only hang out with the popular kids and the jocks only hangout with the jocks I just dont get that Many teenagers today try so hard to be popular That seems to be the main goal a lot of high school students One day someone could be your best friend and then next its like they forgot you even existed I even tried really hard to become popular I remember sophomore year I tried really hard to fit in with all the popular kids I dressed like all of them and I even started to talk like them Then during the end of my sophomore year I began to realize that trying to be popular was just a big waste of time No matter how hard I tried I never seemed to fit in with the popular crowd Especially during baseball season I would be talking with them and they would talk about doing something on the weekend I kept thinking Wow this is great Im finally starting to fit in Then when they decided on something to do they wouldnt even invite me It hurt a lot when they did that It felt like my world was falling apart Did I say something stupid or do something that made them not want to invite me I kept thinking to myself I felt like I had wasted a whole year at school at school When summer started I began to listen to some new bands that I hadnt heard of before One of the first songs I heard was a song about trying to fit in at high school I couldnt believe it These guys were singing about the same stuff that I was going through Their music made me realize that I didnt need to be popular to fit in I could be happy without
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