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"With a solid organization, clear movement over the narrative, and a direct approach to the subject matter, this essay is in a good place to focus on lower-order elements. This will include a proofread for a number of typos, especially toward the end, as well as some revision for occasional awkward phrasing that makes the flow a little bumpy. I also see a few opportunities to enhance the writing by filling in a few details, including why you decided to take this particular class (alluded to in the first paragraph), and a little bit more description to help the reader "hear" the "never-ending gibberish" and understand the word choice at that moment. I was also curious if you thought the lesson was purposefully designed to get you to tune out "the racket" -- the final paragraph seems to suggest that a little, but it's not entirely clear if you completely went against the instructor's method or if that was ultimately the point of the lesson."
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Kibin. (2024). My mixed-bag experience at a meditation class. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/my-mixed-bag-experience-at-a-meditation-class-P1Gn083E
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