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At age seven my biggest concern was one thing learning how to ride a big girl bike I was a very cautious child I never broke any rules and I never did anything dangerous I always wanted to learn new things like the monkey bars or a dive but I was too afraid to fail My brother on the other hand did so many things that I would never even think of doing Learning how to ride my bike without training wheels was one of those things Watching my little brother remove his training wheels for the first time was the worst thing about having to still use them I longed to get rid of them so much but I didnt know how Of course my dad would help me almost everyday but I was just too afraid to take off and fall Sitting on the blazing hot driveway every afternoon as my brother zoomed past me was terrible One day I felt like today was the day Today was the day that I could take off my training wheels I marched confidently up to my dad and told him just that Outside he slowly removed the extra wheels and rolled the shiny pink bike towards me In the middle of the vacant street I cautiously climbed on As he swiftly ran alongside me steadily holding the bike I started to panic What if he let go Did he let go Oh no I think he did After that last thought my head swung around Yes he had let go You are doing it he yelled Keep going At that moment I stopped and fell As I was sitting on the rough concrete with my stinging cut knee I began to give up The tears that started falling from my watery eyes were not just because of the pain but also the feeling of failure The moment my brother opened the garage door I could
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