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My Most Memorable Moments at Work

This essay is a personal account the author's notable experiences at several of their jobs. Describing what led up to these events and what followed afterwards, the author reflects on some of their more embarrassing incidents and hopes for their current job.
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Natalie's feedback:

"You certainly wrote about some memorable instances! You did a good job of staying on topic and following the prompt, although I will suggest maybe focusing on one incident and going into more detail about that particular event. Your paper followed a logical order and your conclusion wrapped things up nicely, but I would try to rework your introduction a little bit more. Formatting style is listed as MLA and while your paragraphs look pretty good, I would suggest referencing PurdueOWL's MLA Style Guide in order to make sure that your title, heading, and page numbers are done correctly. There were a few misspellings and incorrect uses of punctuation here and there, but these seem to be simple mistakes rather than outright errors, so be sure to proofread your paper carefully before submitting the final draft to your teacher. Overall, you did a good job of talking about your most memorable moments at work. With some tweaks here and there, you are on your way to having a great paper."

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