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All my life since I was adopted it was always just mom and I If I needed her for anything she was there for me On June 15th mom came home and told me that we had company coming so make sure my room was clean and I looked presentable Did not think anything of it because mom always had something going on the weekends but I did notice this time was a little different Mom spent at least an hours trying to find the perfect outfit 2 hours later someone finally knocked on the door Mom introduced him as George and told me that she has been dating him for 6 months now and it was time for me to meet him I did not like the idea to much but mom was happy so thats all that mattered Months and months went by The more I got to know him the more I did not like him There was a feeling he gave me that I did not like He always wanted hugs from me If I was in my bedroom he would always just walk in even after mom would say I was changing It was the worst feeling I told myself that I was making myself feel like that because I was jealous that he took all moms time so I just let it go Months went by and his actions towards me became worse I ended up telling my mom that I was uncomfortable and how he always put his hands by my butt when he hugged me I begged her to break up with him She told me that I was just not used to not having all the attention That she was happy and that I should be happy for her I knew that I hurt her by saying that so I just let it go A year later on October 28th mom came home and told me
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