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My New Friends I grew up in a small town with Mary Jane my brothers girlfriend Mary Jane was like my little sister Her brother and I were friends and wherever we went Mary Jane could be found not far behind Mary Jane was diagnosed with diabetes at the tender age of 11 Nevertheless she was a beautiful girl She had blonde hair that fell into long spiral curls that bounced when she would walk I will never forget the day she died with my tiny undeveloped nephew in her womb My life is now lead by guilt sorrow and remorse Guilt is beside me because of my selfishness I did not agree with the things that were happening in the relationship that my brother and Mary Jane shared It seemed to me that every time my brother started to have too much fun it was time for Mary Jane to get sick I remember the words she used to say My legs feel like noodles we have to go home and there they would go like a mother and her scolded child behind her with his head hung Despite this was not my own relationship I became angry and finally exploded all of my negative feelings onto both of them I said things that should not have been said to a starving dog rummaging through the trash for a tiny morsel of food We did not speak to each other for several weeks even though we only lived a few blocks apart Eventually Mary Jane and my brother started to come by to visit We went on with our lives as though nothing had ever happened I never apologized for the things that I said therefore guilt and I walk hand-in-hand down the winding roads of life Specht 2 Sorrow is now my companion also I began to love Mary Jane as my sister again We would go shopping together on
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