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What would life had been like with an older brother or sister close at hand I wonder this at least once a week when I am by myself in my room angry depressed or confused over something like an argument I had with one or both of my two younger siblings Not that I have many fights with Jamie andor Bryce or that I am angry andor depressed abundantly just sometimes I wish there is an older sibling to talk to to give me advice to teach me as well as many other things A sibling to take more responsibility off my shoulders It was possible it could have happened but didnt In the fifth grade my parents decided that I could finally have a dog My mom and I went to the pet store and there were two snow-white American Eskimos I told my mom I wanted the one that was not half asleep she told the employee and the employee let the dog out of the cage so I could play with it and make my final decision Once the dog came out the other dog woke up and once he realized that his brother was going to be taken away the dog started to cry When I heard the dogs tears I started to shed my own tears My mom knew I wanted him so she got him anyway I never knew why that struck me the way it did until I was told things I never knew Around the beginning of my eighth grade year my dads casino failed my parents fought and my dad lied to my mom numerous times Finally she had enough of it filed for bankruptcy and separated from my dad So I lived with my mom my brother and my sister Within a few months my mom told me all of my dads lies his half-truths and that I could have had an older brother or
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