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For a large chunk of my life I was fat Theres no other way to put it to me thats how I see it With that being said I never thought myself capable of doing any kind of running let alone doing a 62-mile race and actually finishing itOn New Years Eve this past year my best friend Eric his girlfriend Clara and I went bowling I was having a pretty awesome time considering I was the only one underage and my girlfriend couldnt be bothered to come with me Eric decides to tell me that Ive lost a lot of weight since Ive been working out with him and he decided that he wanted me to start running with him too His idea was to have me run in the monument ave 10k in April I said theres no way I cant run Ive never been able to I lose my breath too easily its impossible for me to run a single mile let alone a little more than six He looked at me and said Roof shut up and just do it So I agreed to try but thats all I would promise because I really didnt have any faith in myself whatsoeverTwo days later my phone rang at six am I answered it in a panic because no one calls me that early unless theres a problem I dont like to be bothered until at least ten It was Eric asking if I was ready to start training so it began It was a long four months and I tried to quit at least three times a day Within the first two weeks I went from not being able to run a quarter of a mile to being able to do one and a half That progress wasnt good enough for me I expected to be able to run the whole thing with just a few weeks of training but that wasnt
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