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I was there at school waiting for her to tell her the truth about how I felt about her It felt like it was forever but it was only 5 minutes She came out of her class like a bee waiting to get out of the beehive but 5 minutes before she came out I thought for about a couple minutes thinking back when I first had a real conversation with her other than in Algebra II class It was 2 weeks before winter break in February I was reading Ranma a manga when I saw her in the corner of my eyes in a corner in the library doing spinach homework She looked familiar then I had remembered that she was in my Algebra II class Shes pretty smart in that class I approached her and said Hi how you doingYou cool She says Do I know you Few moments later she says Oh yeah youre Edward from Algebra II class Yes thats right I replied I had forgotten her name so I went Your names Jessica rightShe replies Yup thats me From that moment on I had spent 40 minutes talking about how she and I are from the Philippines She can speak Tagalog and Visaya fluently while I can speak both of those only in bits and pieces Half the time I didnt know what she was talking about because all I could focus on was her face Shes so beautiful All I thought about was her personality is so different than people I hang with Shes so awesome I thought while she was talking Her smooth skin made me stare blindly at her more Her smellsmelled like baby powder which I happened to really like She is so petite-looking she weighed 90 pounds and is 5 feet and 3 inches All I could do was smile and nod It was very awkward but then she talked about how she listens
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