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Marriage is a big step for anyone no matter their age I thought that at seventeen I was ready to take on the challenge I married and quickly realized that it was not the fairy tale I thought it would be Marriage involves sacrifice and patients neither of which we had and at this point there was not much love involved just co-existing I went out with friends on my birthday to escape the stress of a bad relationship for the evening at least I walked into the bar and there he was standing six-foot five inches tall dark hair and handsome brown eyes He was wearing a leather jacket and rather flattering blue jeans My imagination was running wild thinking unladylike thoughts He was with his friends just trying to enjoy a Saturday night I knew from the moment I laid my eyes on him that I would at least speak to him I honestly didnt think that he would give me the time of day I was just an average house wife without anything to offer When we got our drinks I deliberately chose the table across from theirs in hopes he would notice me We were talking amongst ourselves and at some point the conversation had spread to their table and we were now one group I was not the only one who had noticed him apparently a more confident friend of mine had started a conversation with him I just kept my distance and smiled at him from across the table I was surprised at the smile I received in return The bar was closing and I hadnt spoken a word to him all night My friend went to the restroom and I saw that as my chance I walked up and the first words out of my mouth were I dont know what she sees in you I promptly apologized for
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