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My Review of a Tiger Woods Biography

This book review of a biography of Tiger Woods praises the author's selection of biographical detail and the writing's ability to make golf interesting. The student critiques the colorblind approach the book takes toward race.
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This essay received a B by one of Kibin's paper graders. Click here to see what was done well and what needs improvement.

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Exactly what I needed.
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Bridget's feedback:

"I agree that the story behind the name "Tiger" is really interesting, and your point about exploring race further shows a willingness to enter into conversation with the book. As you move forward, I recommend a focus on paragraphing, as the use of two very long paragraphs makes the overall project feel a little rushed or breathless. I can see, at least, cutting each of the current paragraphs into two, but take a look at what you have down on the page and look for natural moments where the discussion shifts. A reverse outline can really help get this kind of view on the argumentation. As a final note, make sure to introduce the book (title, author) early in the essay."

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