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My Review of West Side Story at the Papermill Theater

In this positive review of a local production of West Side Story, the student also describes the theater, a former papermill.
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Bridget's feedback:

"This is an engaging piece of writing! The details about the theater and the building help draw the reader into the experience of seeing the play. I encourage you to keep fleshing out the review of the play itself with a few more details about the production. Can you explore in para. 5 how the production itself helped evoke the emotions you describe on page 2? Currently, the discussion there is oriented largely around the plot.

The other main task is in proofreading. Fairly frequent errors and typos, including punctuation issues, spelling, and similar, impact local clarity, forcing the reader to double back. Your enthusiasm about going to see the play is infectious and animates this essay, so make sure your reader gets to experience that without the distraction of typos."

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