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"You have done an excellent job making an impact on the reader by telling your story. You have thoroughly described your life circumstances, how every one of them influences your faith, and how you use your faith to impact others. As a reader, it is somewhat unclear what the overall purpose of your paper is. If this is an assignment for class where you are answering a prompt or a personal statement for an application, the reader should be able to tell. You can quickly resolve this by adding some information to your introduction. You have done a great job sharing your story, but there are a few places where the reader might be left wanting details. Throughout the body of the essay, there are some places where you jump from one idea to a new one abruptly. You can also quickly resolve this by adding transitional phrases or sentences where necessary. Last, there are a minimal number of formatting, grammar, and punctuation mistakes scattered throughout. Doing a read-through of your paper should allow for these to quickly be corrected."
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(Kibin, 2024)
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Kibin. (2024). My strong relationship with christ as a christian. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/my-strong-relationship-with-christ-as-a-christian-Mv7NMpS6
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("My Strong Relationship with Christ as a Christian.")
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