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It was this year this month this week when my birthday was going to comeAt last I have waited for this day for almost a year and have planned forit as well Its a wonderful day for a person to celebrate the day she wasborn And thats why I treasure this day mostly in my life and everyonewho knows me knows that birthday is the most important thing that goes inmy life Birthdays are more important to me than graduation then weddingsthen Christmas Thats what birthday means to meThat year was different from my other years If you were wondering whathappened well let me just start out with this My birthday was in a weekand everyone knows it As I entered the school I went straight forward tomy locker with my best friend She asked me out of the blueWhat do youwant for your birthday I was kind of stumped I never thought my bestfriend would ask me a question like that so I told herIll think aboutit All day long I would think of the perfect present then something justpopped into my head and I had the perfect present I went to my best friendand told herI know what I want she looked at me curiously and askedWhat is it I replied by sayingI want James She looked at me rightaway with her eyes wide open and wondering if she heard it mistakenly andsaidYou want James I repliedYes at that moment she was thinking howshe could get him to come to my birthday party as my date Well if you werewondering who James is well he is this perfect girl fantasy that everygirl dreams ofIt was the second day of school and three more days to go until mybirthday I went right to my locker and went to look for my best friend Iwas looking everywhere until I saw her with James laughing their heartsout Im not going to lie to you I was
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