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Ring ring went Mandys phone early Saturday Morning It was Tori Liz and Kim asking if she wanted to go to the mall and look for Halloween costumes They all started talking about how much money they each had to spend and then on to boys and about their trick or treating plans By the time they were all done talking and ready to go to the mall it was almost 1200 in the afternoon Kims mom would be there shortly to pick them all up When they got to the mall they all agreed they were kinda hungry so they picked up a pretzel at Auntie Annes Pretzels When they finished their pretzels Liz suggested to go to Spencers for the best gifts They got so involved with their costume shopping that they didnt pay any attention about the time As they were passing Kohls the bright lights in the mall slowly dimmed and they could hear the eckos of the doors locking When Tori glanced at her watch it read 1001 PM The mall closed at 1000 They all ran to the nearest doors They were trapped in They started beating on the doors and panicing Kim looked up in the sky and discovered there was a full moon Tori saw a shadow slowly approaching them They started trembling vigerously They looked in the store windows that were now closed and saw costumes coming alive into wat they were That was alaming to all of them The shadow was getting even closer They had no clue on what to do except to be scared and panic They started running fast faster than they have ever ran before The shadow just kept on following them They circled around the fountain right past McDonalds They saw a garbage can so they hid behind it The shadow slowly crapt up behind them and the hideous shadow turned out to be a black
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