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Ring ring ring ring I slowly open my eyes unaware of my surroundings until everything got back into focus I hear the rapid pace of foots steps coming down the hall and my dads groggy voice saying hello These next few minutes were the worst minutes of my life I hear my dads voice crack as he says Im coming followed by uncontrollable sobbing Right then and there as I was ease dropping I knew exactly what happened July 21st 2012 at 248am the moment my world came crashing down the moment my heart was ripped straight in two the moment my grandpa passed away Hearing my dad bawl into the phone was heart wrenching Seeing someone you looked at as a strong minded hero become hurt with disbelief is not something you have on your bucket list not on mine anyway I was in shock too even though we knew it was coming we didnt want to belief it finally happened My body rested motionless as a tried to wrap my head around on what to was going on trying to tell myself that this was not a dream I waited for my dad to leave before I got up to see my mom After hearing him start up the dodge and gradually disappear down the dusty dirt road I got enough guts to have my fear corrected As I walked into my parents room I see a bright red face with tears making tracks down my moms face which they would settle at the bottom of her quivering chin All it took was two words It happned then the slight nod of my moms head Yup this wasnt a dream You may think well everyone goes through a death in the family but one reason why this was so hard for me is because I had never experienced a family death especially someone who meant the world to me I was puddin according
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