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Over the years Ive watched him grow Through the baby stages to death Ive seen the struggles the joy the despair It was all clear He never gave a thought that he wasnt alone in his room He was never alone I was there I was there in the walls the dirty carpet he refused to clean in the posters the holes in that stinky boy smell he emitted as a teen I was there for him strong and sturdy as the walls Comforted him as he sobbed on my carpet I was his escape his punishment When he knew noone else was there he would run to me I was there I was there for his arrival I was there to watch him all bundled up and warm smiling and asleep more peaceful then hell ever be as he grows old I was there to soothe him asleep as his mother drinks downstairs and his father leaves I was there for his first steps I was there to guide him along my walls begging for love and affection I was there to praise him I was there I was there when he entered grade school I was there to comfort him when the kids teased him He had no mother no father Endless torments berated him I was there to hold him I was there I was there when he was 17 I was watching as he tied the rope to the fan I was there for the plans the preparation and the event itself I was there to pry the fan loose from the drywall I was there I was there when he was 34 Living alone safe and captive in my walls I was there as he arranged my insides to their cleanest perfection I was there when he swallowed the pills I was there to hide the last dose needed to take him away I was
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