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Most people say that their favorite place is where they wereborn but I feel the opposite way I was born in Californiabut my favorite place on earth is one of the snowywindyandbeautiful states of America Can you guess which state itis New York is the one I chose this as my favorite placebecause most of my dads part of the family live there thereare many attractions and I love the weather If you were to go to aplace that youve always wanted to go butno family lived there it would be a little weird because youwould have trouble getting to places and its less fun Thatis one of the reasons why New York is my favorite placebecause I have family members living there When I get their Ican play with a bunch of my cousins and if I need to get somewhere I can ask my grandma or my aunt to take my family and methere I visit New york almost every year so I know this placein person which I couldnt say about my birth place because Ionly lived there until I was threeAlmost all the people of the world know that Manhattan New Yorkis the capital of the United States which makes this place evenmore unique This state has a tourist attraction that ispart ofhistory this attraction is the statue of liberty Anotherattraction to me in New York is a place calledBethelinWallkillThis is the place where they produce and make new magazinesbibles and many more I also like going to the huge 4floormall next to my grandmas house But there is also onemore reason why New York is my favorite place As I said at the beginning New York is snowy windy andbeautiful I love the cold weather that is why I like visitingNew York in September orDecember I have never liked the hotweather because at least when it is cold you can put a jacketon but you cant to do anything when
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