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Non-Compliance with Mask Mandates During the COVID-19 Pandemic Has Several Possible Causes

This essay identifies three possible reasons behind many Americans' refusal to wear masks during the COVID-19 pandemic.
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Bob's feedback:

"The possible reasons that you've identified for non-compliance with the mask mandate certainly sound plausible and are well defined. However, it is important to be careful about how these reasons are being presented. While your three main reasons are likely correct, your paper does not cite research that specifically suggests that these are the reasons for the non-compliance. Although you cite sources for these ideas, the text of the paper does not suggest how it was determined that these are the main factors behind not wearing a mask. Consider rewording your supporting paragraphs to suggest that the scholars you cite have reason to believe that these reasons are legitimate. The paper is generally well-written and well-organized, and shoring up the authority behind your claims will make it stronger still."

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