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I am an adopted child The day that two strangers walked into my foster home was the day my life changed forever My adopted parents changed my life because they gave me security love and a family Something I had never had before My mom and dad had gotten me when I was around 4 or 5 years old Before my parents got my two brothers and I we had been scooped off the streets by the government and put into foster care we were in foster care for a good 2 yearsDuring the last six months of belonging to the government in a foster home two people had entered into the lives of my brothers and I at first they were just visitors Those tow visitors had soon become two of the most important people to a newborn baby a 4 year old and a 7 year olds lifeTaken away from the foster home that had given us 3 children a place to live and then brought into a completely new home with new people was a frightening experience for us We were scared but we were given a nice big home nice clothes a nice comfortable bed to sleep on and more food than we could ever imagine We were safe here it was a good change for us three Those people would become my mom and my dad for the rest of our lives They would soon take full responsibility of 3 children who werent born into their family Those people changed 3 little childrens lives foreverThe adoption process was long and tiring I remember getting dressed up nicely several times to go to a court house and watch my soon to become parents sign paper after paper on a wooden desk for what seemed hours As a treat we would always go out to lunch or dinner depending on the time of day it wasOnce the adoption process was all
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