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Theme I only hope that one day I will have the same feeling of intuition as I had that night to forget about my life and just go out and have a little fun It might turn out to be one of those nights one of those magical nights Grammer and punctuation are a little off The night was clear and the moon was yellow and all the stars were shining brightly in velvet sky The year was 1999 almost the end of summer I was arriving at my last party before I would eventually become a senior in high school I really didnt feel like attending the bash I had just gotten in an argument with my Father not to mention I really had had a hard day at work I felt disappointed and tired yet I felt as though something incredible would take place if I were present so I talked myself into going I was wearing my black leather pants with a white dress shirt and sporting a new hairstyle short but not to short I was disappointed at first just sitting there outside alone talking with my friends about meaningless matters thinking of calling it a night and going home But I had yet to realize that this was the night I first gazed upon her innocent eyes She was the most gorgeous girl I had ever seen in my life I admired her from afar her long dark-brown hair her picture perfect face and that special sparkle in her eyes She was just so perfect only wearing blue jeans and a red shirt I was only seventeen then and I had never seen such beauty up close As I fixed my eyes on her she was being accompanied by what I thought at that moment was her boy-friend and then our eyes locked together We looked intently at each other for what seemed an eternity Even her friend
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