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Order versus Chaos in Lord of the Flies by William Golding

In this analytical essay, a student talks about the introduction of order and chaos in Lord of the Flies by William Golding. The student discusses how Piggy represents order while Jack represents chaos.
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Angela's feedback:

"You make some strong points about how Golding introduces the idea of order versus chaos, and you do a great job of integrating direct quotes into your work and citing them properly. Unfortunately, your body paragraphs dip into providing a summary of the book more than they do a discussion of the symbolism found in different characters and objects in the story. Some revision should be done to refocus your paper on Piggy and the conch as symbols of order in contrast to Jack and the fire as symbols of chaos. Regarding writing convention errors, there are repeated instances of awkward phrasing such as “boys urged to.” Review is needed to double-check your comma use, especially in relation to the word “and.” There is also a typo with the use of “the” instead of “they.”"

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