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"Well done engaging the reader with content that kept their attention throughout the entire essay. You want to be sure you are giving an introduction, letting the reader know what you will be focusing on throughout the paper. When it comes to organization, let's give smooth transitions. From the first to the second paragraph, you could start the second paragraph with, "While Steve Rogers is known for his fighting spirit, Tony Stark--otherwise known as Iron Man--is always prepared for any contingency." This creates a bridge from the paragraph before (about Steve Rogers) and smoothly brings the subject to Tony Stark. You also want to be sure that you are giving a conclusion that shares the overview of the body paragraphs and what the reader should be taking away from your work. Regarding the format, let's make sure your paragraphs are formatted in a uniform manner. You would also benefit from a round of proofreading to ensure all issues with punctuation, sentence structure, and spelling are resolved before submitting your work."
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