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Our Basic Needs for Sustenance, an Income, and Some Material Items

In this reflective essay, a student talks about people's basic needs for sustenance, an income, and some material items. The student provides examples from his own life and from outside resources such as the book Angela's Ashes by Frank McCourt to show how all people have basic needs they seek to fulfill.
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Angela's feedback:

"Your introduction and conclusion work well together to reiterate the main topic, and you provide good examples for the different basic needs you discuss. The example you pull from Angela's Ashes is especially effective since it shows how people's material needs can change based on geography or other factors that may be easily overlooked. However, your first body paragraph mostly repeats what you already said in your introduction, so it would be best to merge the two paragraphs together if you feel strongly about keeping the content. Aside from that, an edit is needed to smooth out your language use and address items such as missing pieces of punctuation."

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