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I generally regard myself as a disorganized person I believe this is an innate trait for me As far as I can remember Ive always been disorganized But throughout my life I developed some ways to cope with it especially after having some negative experiences So what was the main factor that made me disorganized person I strongly believe that it was a combination of both nature and nurture but if I had to choose one I would have to say that the genes that came from my father have a big impact on this trait My father is also a disorganized person I am very much alike to him in this regard On the other hand my mother is extremely organized Shes someone who tries to keep everything as organized as possible Obviously saying that one of my parents also shows this trait is not enough evidence to support this theory but theres more The most important reason I believe the nature is the primary factor is my brother Hes four years younger than me and just like my mother hes one of the most organized people Ive seen in my life Hes my absolute opposite But the fact is we have been brought up in the same house with the same parents Most of the time we even shared the same room And our parents behavior towards us was almost identical As I was interacting constantly with my brother one would think that either my or his behaviors should have been changed in one way or another But its not the case Of course there could be some minor changes that I could not observe but in general we always have been completely different in terms of being organized This is the main reason that I believe heredity is the dominant factor The other reason is my parents behavior toward us Ive read some theories claiming that people are disorganized because nobody taught
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