scroll to top
Stuck on your essay?
Get ideas from this essay and see how your work stacks up
Word Count: 1,863
I could feel the rain on my skin as my classmates and I hurried over to the T station that afternoon Tiffany Kristy Amy and I were making our way to our destination Downtown Crossing The weather that afternoon was not welcoming the clouds abounded and a constant rain hovered over us the entire trip As we entered the Davis Square T station we realized our mistakewe had chosen to take our trip during rush hour While the mob of people made it difficult to board the T or to even nab a seat it dawned on me that this was the perfect opportunity to observe a large majority of Bostonians What could be better than a subway car overflowing with commuters to get to know your fellow city folk Tiff Kristy Amy and I huddled close together on the car We made a few jokes giggled a bit and shared experiences It was interesting to learn that Kristy spent a month in Europe with only her best friend and a free spirit to take her where she pleased At the Porter Square stop a man sat down next to me and began to play music on his headphones loudly It was a sort of JamaicanReggae music which was a little foreign to me I listened intently and noticed how his head bobbed to the rhythm of the notes This African-American man was dressed a bit shabbily and he was a contrast to the many Caucasian commuters dressed in their business suits and shiny ties At the Harvard Square stop where I noticed a large part of the commuters began to depart there was music playing As the doors of the T opened the lively music of drums and percussion flowed into our subway car We smiled and danced around for a bit until the doors began to close That was not the end of our music extravaganza though because at the next stop
@Kibin is a lifesaver for my essay right now!!
- Sandra Slivka, student @ UC Berkeley
Wow, this is the best essay help I've ever received!
- Camvu Pham, student @ U of M
If I'd known about @Kibin in college, I would have gotten much more sleep
- Jen Soust, alumni @ UCLA