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Parenting 2.0: The Advantages of a Less Strict Parenting Style

This essay ultimately argues that less strict parenting is a more beneficial parenting approach and leads to improved relationships between parents and older children.
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This essay received a B by one of Kibin's paper graders. Click here to see what was done well and what needs improvement.

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Christina's feedback:

"Your essay is well-structured, and your thoughts are articulated clearly. Since you are ultimately arguing that less strict parenting is better, consider making that clearer from the start. Right now, your body paragraphs are very organized and the information has a natural progression that shows your reasoning and logic. However, your introduction feels disjointed and doesn't necessarily lead the reader to understand that you're arguing for less strict parenting. The discussion about values at the start feels out of place. Watch out for informal or non-specific language like "can cause a lot of problems." With a round of editing with these things in mind, you should have a great final draft."

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