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There are many parts that add up to the sum of me from my physical appearance intelligence personality experiences religion likes and dislikes to my values and beliefs All of these are different parts is what makes up the sum of me Although many say physical appearance isnt everything which is for the most part is true The physical appearance is the part that everyone one sees first and off that they make their judgments and opinions of who you are Just from the 1st look you may give off to the way you wear your hair and the way you dress I believe that my appearance shows people that I am a strong individual who follows no one but herself The intelligence part shows people what you know and where your head is at I believe that a persons intelligence is a mix of everything from book knowledge to street knowledge and everything in between I believe that my intelligence is a mix of things Ive learned from personal experiences to what Ive learned in school and from things Ive read The personality is the biggest part to make up the sum of a person Personality is what makes you who you are from how you act to the way you speak and how you make others feel I believe my personality says that Im a very warm strong willed and minded person who loves to be around other people cares deeply for the ones I call my close friends and family and whos shy at times but for the most part outgoing Experience is something makes you who you are and its up to up to decide if its going to make you better or bitter I believe that my experiences have made me stronger and that they have taught me a lot Religion values and beliefs are a part of a person as a whole that I believe helps guide
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