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It took me awhile to figure out what my passion actually is in life At first I kept thinking my passion included my older brother when in fact it includes my little brother When I hear the word passion I think of something I have a strong desire for My passion is to graduate from college and be the role model my little brother says he looks up toThe reason why at first I thought my passion included my older brother was because I believed I wanted to help him While in reality the whole time I was mistaking passion for resentment I know its a strong feeling to use towards a person in your family but it is how I feel It took me awhile to accept that it was actually resentment that I had toward him because I love my brother The more I kept thinking about it the more it became clearer that I didnt really want to help him I couldnt name one reason why I thought my passion was to help him All I could think of was why he frustrates me and how his actions make me feel I despised him for how my mom made things so easy for him and for me she made it difficult She treated my older brother like if he was her world and as if he was more important than me I shouldnt have felt that way since he has dyslexia but I feel that there is a limit to how she shouldve treated him I know its not his fault but I take the anger I have towards my mom out on him I resented them both because of the relationship they had with each other I was blinded by all the hatred that I couldnt figure out what my desire was really for Therefore I decided to release every thought I had that included my mom and older brother
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