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If every person in the entire world were equal life would be very dull and even more pointless Every person should be allowed to excel in what they do best Though certain things may cause some to feel insecure they too have something they excel at People who have certain gifts are to be admired not punished People should be allowed to excel in what they do best If someone is blessed with intelligence somewhat over average then good for them It should not be something worth punishing Differences make life more exciting People who are not excellent in one field should not feel insecure or worthless because they most likely excel in some other field Everyone is good at something That is why there are so many different job fields Not everyone can be a professional football player but that doesnt make you bad or damaged in any way People who excel at certain things should be admired not punished Who would want to watch an actor who couldnt act Society would be lost without people to look up to because of their achievements People who bad mouth certain figures are simply jealous Some one doesnt even have to be famous to be admired just do good things If people were punished for every achievement they made then they wouldnt even care to try People are not made to be equal in every way Punishing someone because they excel at something you dont would be insane If every person in the entire world were equal life would be very dull and even more pointless
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