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Be it good or bad influential factors are everywhere we turn Beinginfluenced by others is one of the most primitive ways of life Peopleare molded by those around them whether they want to believe so or notOne of the most influential people in my life has been a young man Iknew when I was younger Im not sure I remember his name anymore buthe took away my innocence at age six by molesting me His influencesupon me have had horrible repercussions but there has shockingly beensome good outcomes as well Another person who has shaped the youngwoman Ive become is my older sister Patricia I feel like theres beenabsolutely no negativity in the way shes touched my life Without herwho knows what Id be like to this day My sister and this namelessyoung man have been the two people in my life who have touched me thedeepest and left the biggest impressions on my personality When I was growing up I lived in a household with patents who were toopreoccupied with drugs to look into details about my whereabouts I wasbe able to roam the streets of the trailer park I had lived in and myparents would never question me Being so young this wasnt thesmartest thing I ended up hanging out with an older crowd who I feltaccepted me almost like a little sister Being six years old andhanging around older kids even made me feel cool that stopped abruptlywhen one of the guys decided to take advantage of me The day he firstdid it was like any other until he asked me to come inside his house sohe could show me his room I was reluctant at first but I didnt want toupset him so I agreed The moment I went into his room is when hestarted his first of many rounds of molesting me this is when my lifechanged foreverNearly every day after that for the next three consecutive
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