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The days were the same and our money was running out Our family didnt know what to do when it came to earning more money untill that good old mill house alowed me to work at there mill Mills Mills was the name and when I saw my name sadie richmond on that list of applicants accepted I knew that it was going to help our family a lot I couldnt wait the 30 days untill i finally got to work there untill the day cameI called it the day of happyness the day I would leave the farm and finally work in a different atmosphere The day that everything would change from the usual farm turning all the anoyances into a good change The feeling of moving was so different there was a mixture of fear happyness boredom and exitement all combined to make an all new emotion I knew I was scared becausee I was shaking in the seat the whole 5 minute ride all the other emotions were nothing cocmpared to the fear When I got to Mills Mills i realised that there were at least 800 people working and It didnt look as bad as I thoughtThree hours have passsed on my first day and I was so sore I could barely move on I knew this would have to take some time to get used to The leaders of this organisation said that they would take care of us making sure we wouldnt get hurt and so forth but really this was the worst conditions that I have ever been in but at least it was a change from the old farming A couple more hours passedand then it was time to call it a day people started to leave and so did I ready to go back home after m first dayi almost fell asleep
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