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My mother had me at a very young age She witnessed the difficulty of raising a child and trying to finish school Her experience led her to create a path for me to follow to make sure I would not follow in her footsteps Because of her I am in the Top 10 of my class in several Honor Societies and will be the first person in my family to graduate and continue on to college However even with the countless hours of schoolwork and volunteering the dream of continuing my education can only go so far Being the daughter of a single mother who works at a low income job and lives paycheck to paycheck is hard enough but also makes the possibility of attending college a distant dream It is a common misconception that All As will pay for college but this is only a myth Money pays for college and money does not grow on trees This scholarship would give me the opportunity to attend college graduate with a Bachelors in Animal Science and eventually obtain my Doctorate in Veterinary Medicine In this world education is the key to success and I am willing to give it my all to reach my career and be able to help others To give back to my community I am compiling a book that will serve as a guide for students like me who need help in the scholarship process In addition I also plan to establish a scholarship fund for students who wish to further their education but are not able to because of financial issues I strive for excellence in everything I do and getting this scholarship will help me move forward and closer to reaching my goals and dreams for myself and my community
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