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Foolish LoveThroughout my life I have behaved in many of foolish ways due to the emotion called love Love is something I used to dream about as a child and have grown to fear as an adult Every person feels differently about love but because of David I hurt my parents my self-esteem and ability to trust peopleAt the age of fourteen I was not concerned with my parents feelings I did exactly the opposite of what they told me to do and did not think about the consequences When they found out I was dating a guy five years older than me they tried to prohibit me from seeing him again I was in love so I made it possible to see David every time he wanted to see me I would get my parents to drop me off somewhere like the movies or putt-putt and he would pick me up after they had left I would sneak out of my bedroom window and meet David down the road I did not care if my parents found out all that mattered to me was seeing David I blamed everything that went wrong in my life on them If David did not call me one night I would accuse them of taking the phone off the hook If David was rude to me I would claim it was because he knew they did not like him I would do anything to ignore the fact that David did not love me It took a while for my parents to forgive me I can only imagine what I put them through I just wanted to be loved by David so deeply I hurt the people who actually loved me the mostNot only did I hurt my parents I hurt my self-esteem to I would constantly criticize myself by thinking the reason David left me was because I was not pretty enough for him In my mind David
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