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Ryan was a peculiar person He was a short slender obnoxious fifteen- year old boy with a long narrow nose like a bird and a squeaky voice like a mouseHe never expressed much about himself and he did not for a long time We were never acquainted at that time but as I observed I noticed some unusual things that most people would not do From time to time he would wander around the gym as if he had no concern in the world He never seemed to smile or show any expression at all he would just make a movement to show what he was feeling No one paid attention to him or what he did for that matter because he was not an important person in the class The more I watched him the stranger he becameOne morning though he started to speak He did not talk much about himself but of other people and what they are like Yet the phrases he exclaimed were rude and inconsiderate of others in the class He talked about his opinion of people and then suddenly people started to dislike him for his actions I was never affected by his words so I ignored him at that point in timeThe next day as I was sprinting down the smooth cement track he began to follow As I slowed down to rest Ryan slammed me to the hard cement ground I lifted myself off the floor and asked him to explain himself I repeatedly continued to ask him why he pushed me but he would not answer Then he started to say discriminatory comments which were offensive to me Once again I asked him to explain himself and he would not Yet he did say somethingRyan exclaimed You want to start somethingI realized he was trying to start a brawl between us so I walked away from him While I was walking he started to imply that
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