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The first time I saw him was about five years ago His name was Bobby and he was a dog in a pet store Bobby was attractive and amicable so I bought him as my pet We then became friends Bobby played an important role in my life He was my athletic partner he was loyal to me and I went through some states of depression with him Bobby was a very good friend of mine I used to play games and do exercises with him after school Although the school day was arduous to me I gained my energy and power back when I saw him As long as he stayed with me I did not care how long I ran or how much time I spent I became stronger and stronger after a time period I was athletic and healthy because I had a capable partner Being loyal to me really touched my heart Bobby never forgot all the tricks I taught him and he never said no to me He satisfied me completely He also never disappointed me and I loved him so much Bobby would attack the people to protect me if they tried to threaten me He performed every action just for me Bobby was also the only one I trusted and talked to There was no secret between him and me During my high school years lacking friends depressed me deeply I did not have the skill to communicate with people and I really loathed myself Therefore instead of committing suicide speaking to Bobby was the only choice and he understood me more than anyone didUnfortunately Bobby died in a car accident one year ago I could not accept the truth there was no one who could replace Bobby I knew he still lived in his life after death I will remember all the happiness and confidence he delivered to me I am glad I truly had a wonderful
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