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Peter Singer's Solution to World Poverty Is Unreasonable

In this reflective essay, a student discusses Peter Singer's solution to world poverty using the example Singer presents concerning a man named Bob and his hard-earned Bugatti. The student argues that people should not be expected to donate to charity on a daily basis since not everyone is financially stable and has money to spare.
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Angela's feedback:

"You present solid reasons to support your position that people should not be obligated to reduce human poverty and suffering by donating to charity. However, your essay's flow is a bit stilted by your use of short paragraphs; consider combining some of your content to create longer paragraphs (half a page to three-quarters of a page long, double-spaced). You should avoid constructing one-sentence paragraphs whenever possible. Run-on sentences such as the second to last sentence in your second paragraph should be recast to improve your work's readability. In terms of MLA style, double (2.0) spacing should be consistently maintained within a paragraph and between all paragraphs. No extra spaces should be inserted in between paragraphs. In academic writing, italics instead of boldface are typically used for emphasis."

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